Thursday, 1 May 2014

by Harriett

Dragon
Searching, looking
Running, raging, roaring
As quick as a very fast sports car
HUNTING !!!

Dragon
Flying, chasing
Frantically, flapping, fast
Roaring like a great storm at sea
BEWARE!!!

10 comments:

  1. That is a fantastic piece of work.
    Hadhia
    Acocks Green Primary School

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  2. great poem . great use of words !
    Numayr acocksgreen primary school

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  3. well done! harriet.. sarah a.g.p.s

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  4. well done harriet i like your poem :) :)

    from sumaiyah 6Tk Acocks Green Primary School

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    1. Harriet I loved that poem

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  5. hi, i really like your poem,it was a great use of words.
    From Manpreet A.G.P.S

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  6. i really liked your poem,it was very brilliant!

    Roisin
    A.G.P.S.

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  7. I loved your poem! It was Amazing!

    Louisa
    Acocks Green Primary School

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  8. Hi Harriett Loved your poem ! =)

    Ella! TPS UK

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