Tuesday, 29 April 2014


by Iratxe

waking, smelling
lonely creature
white eyes as green as emeralds

1 comment:

  1. Mrs. Essenburg1 May 2014 at 01:55

    Dear Iratxe,

    What great images you have in your poem! I love the simile you used, because it is so thought provoking--"white eyes green as emeralds". I also like the idea of dragons as lonely. I hadn't thought of it before, but I suppose they are. It can't be easy being a creature that everyone is afraid of.

    Great job!

    Mrs. Essenburg
    Third Grade Teacher
    Michigan, USA


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