Sunday, 27 April 2014

by Sam

Dragon


Twisting,turning
Ranting,raging
As ballistic as an angry bull
Hunting


Dragon


Searching,killing
Dangerously deadly
With fury as hot as irons

Killer

2 comments:

  1. Dear Sam,

    Your poems create such a powerful image. Your dragon sounds dangerous! I love your alliteration, your strong verbs, and great word choice. I can really picture your dragon and it's definitely a ferocious one. What a wonderful poem!

    Mrs. Essenburg
    Third Grade Teacher
    Michigan, USA

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  2. Thank you i think it is really easy to imagine it to.Sam

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