Tuesday, 29 April 2014

by Millie N


           twisting tail,evil eyes
     as sharp as a dragons canine

    electrifying eyes,as pointed as a knife
         furious as a wild hurricane

twisting tail,electrifying roar
roaring like a great storm at sea

by millie


  1. Dear Millie,

    What powerful verbs you used for your poem. It helps make your poem come alive. I also love the similes. The comparisons help me make a great picture in my mind of what your dragons look like.

    Mrs. Essenburg
    Third Grade Teacher
    Michigan, USA

  2. Dear Millie ,
    Your posts is very cool. I think that dragon are cool do you? Please visit at jessenbu.edublogs.org From Abby


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