Tuesday, 29 April 2014

by Daisy

Dragon

Dragon
Sneaking,Guarding
Twisting tail,Manky teeth
With eyes as green as emeralds

Fire

3 comments:

  1. good job daisy i loved the way you described about the eyes by Liaba 6TK Acocks Green Primary School

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  2. i really like you peom daisy you used similes well done :) :) :)
    from sumaiyah 6TK Acocks Green Primary School :) :)

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  3. I loved you poem. lots of description!
    Manpreet A.G.P.S

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