Friday, 30 March 2012

dave the chocolate bunny !!!

In the land of sweet`s dave the chocolate bunny was at the beach.Everyone els had brung there cool box`s so they do`nt melt but dave had forgot his cool box so … dave the chocolate rabbit melted in the sun “helllp i’m  melting” dave said

“someone call an ambulance this poor rabitt is meting” said steve the gingerbread man

nee nor nee

“That`s the ambulance kwik trifels get in get the rabbit in the fridge” said steve

“Thank you er what's your name” said trifle  guy

“steve” said steve

“thanks steve” said trifle guy


  1. this story is very wierd and good

  2. James (Team 100WC)5 April 2012 at 12:18

    I hope you don't leave your chocolate out in the sun to melt as well Sid. How was the ambulance going to help the chocolate bunny? Keep up the good work, remember to check you work to make sure it is the best you can do. I look forward to reading more of your entries for the 100WC.


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