Friday, 30 March 2012

100 Word Challenge By Ellie B


The unlucky day

One day Rose, went for a walk in the woods with her dog called Buster. He is red, cind and play fall. Busterter was   acting weird, he was sniffing like he never did before. suddenly he fell in a hole and see the most beautiful golden rapper in the world,Rose get it out of the hole,  she unwrapped it, it was a chocolate bunny, when she got home, she accidentally left it in the sun so the bunny melted in the sun. so the next    day they went to the shop and bort  another scrummy chocolate bunny.
                  
 By Ellie B

       

2 comments:

  1. Hi Ellie,

    Cute piece. I like how the dog found the bunny. Watch your spelling. You have some misspelled words here.

    Nice job.

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