Friday, 30 March 2012

100 word Challenge by Dougal

Bob and the melted chocolate rabbit



Once upon a time, there was a little boy called Bob. Later on that day, Bob started the hunt for the easter bunny. Bob's garden was massive and he still had to find other eggs to. The chocolate rabbit melted in the sun behind the stacks of firewood. Two hours later, he found every egg except one, the chocolate rabbit. He stopped for dinner and came out again. At the end of the day, just as he was coming in, he found the rabbit, so for pudin was warm melted chocolate
“YUM,YUM,YUM,” he said scoffing it down quickly.

1 comment:

  1. Hello Dougal,

    The poor little chocolate rabbit. Not found in time, it melted but at least Bob was able to have the melted chocolate for pudding. :)

    This is a creative use of the prompt, Dougal. Easter egg hunts are always fun but hot days can cause problems for chocolate bunnies.

    Well done! I hope you keep entering the 100WC.

    @Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)
    Teacher, NSW, Australia

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