Friday, 30 March 2012

100 Word challenge by Dan


THE CHOCOLATE RABBIT


One day, a chocolate rabbit was walking down gummybear road when a mob of gingerbread men jumped out in front of him and pulled one of his legs off. Luckily, it didn’t hurt as he was made of chocolate but it did mean he couldn’t walk.
“We’re gonna leave you here to melt and we'll eat your leg to!” said a gruff gingerbread man and they walked off. Soon a gummy bear walked past.
“Yeuch! You’re gross!” he said, and ran off.
Slowly, the chocolate rabbit melted in the sun. Unfortunately, he could not be saved.

4 comments:

  1. Hi Dan & thanks for entering the 100wc! I really enjoyed reading your work - you used the prompt in a really effective way. It reminds me of a sugary version of 'The Good Samaritan'!
    A great effort - keep on blogging, Dan.
    Mr K :-)
    www.ashclassgreenfields.blogspot.com

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  2. What an interesting story Dan. My heart melted nearly as quickly as the chocolate rabbit! It was a good twist to the tale to have the rabbit melt but did you think of having him saved?
    Mr Leatherdale (Team 100wc)

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  3. matty14 england16 May 2012 at 10:23

    well done dan 100 words

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  4. Wow that was an amazing 100word story. It must have taken alot of thought and imagonation to invent that story.
    From Abby and Emily from Hawea Flat School room 6

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