Friday, 30 March 2012

100 word challenge by Charlotte

The chocolate bunny that melted.

One day the were  two  little girls. Their name were Jessica and Nina. Their nanny and grandad went for a bike ride down the block. Whilst they were gone Nina and Jessica were haveing a Easter egg hunt. Jessica found a nice little chocolate bunny rabbit. Jessica left her chocolate bunny in the sun. After about an hour she came back but it had melted.When Jessica came back she saw the chocolate melted in the sun. She cried and cried by that time her nanny and grandad were back. They heard her crying and went out as quickly as possible.
“What is wrong”
“my chocolate  has melted”

1 comment:

  1. What a sad story, perhaps there will be a part two, with a happy ending, from Mrs Smith


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