Friday, 30 March 2012

100 word challenge by Aleysha

The unlucky day for rabbit
  One day Ellie was walking by the river, Ellie sat down because she was tyered.Ellie saw a chocolate bunny.She thought of eating it but she didn’t because someone might of lost it.So she got up and walked round the river again.When she came back the chocolate bunny had melted in the sun warl Ellie walked round the river.Sundenly a girl apered in the trees and came running over to the bench.And she shouted “ITS MELTED MUMMY”.” ow dear "OW DEAR” is that all your going to say “ow dear”.The girl started to cry.  

1 comment:

  1. great story just make sure it makes SENCE!!!!!!


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